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Your webpages
14 May 2019, 13:49
Dear Lead,
Well done for making a start on your webpages, they are looking good.
Here is some feedback for improvement.
1. Add all the pages to the collection you have already started.
2. Contents page: I would rethink the pictures. I don't think a witch stirring a cauldron is the right image that we're going for. You need to keep your webpages fun, but professional.
3. Manufacturing: The picture is half in Spanish. I think you could find a better picture, reference it and explain what is shows. E.g. Write a paragraph describing the manufacturing process.
4. Literature review: Firstly, it is not ling enough. You need to add more information. You need to format the references properly; you can't just have a list of websites. Additionally, there is a lack of academic referencing, so you need to address this.
Keep up the good work!
Faith